Thursday, September 25, 2008

move on silence


secluded in waiting
alone in a monotonous society
attempting to thaw requites
embroidery gathering dust
from fatigue

10 comments:

Adventure girl wanna be said...

Very interesting poem, nice shot. Are you a new blogger? Thank you your kind words;)

Scott Clawson said...

I liked the imagery in this poem. In particular:

embroidery gathering dust
from fatigue

Very nice. Thanks for sharing! :-)

Michelle Johnson said...

With this poem your thoughts are very unique. I especially love the last two lines. And, your photo is beautiful. You gotta love nature when it looks like that. Well done. Have a nice night.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Beautiful photo, and interesting poem, i like the image of the embroidery gathering dust

stu said...

I like the photo, but I'm fairly sure the third line would make more sense with a tiny alteration. 'attempting' perhaps, just so that it doesn't sound like you're using requites as a noun instead of a verb.

tumblewords said...

Lovely photo and words that ring.

Anonymous said...

Thank You Stu that does read much better. I hope you enjoyed the view. Still

Cynthia said...

Attempting ot thaw requites. A very good and timely poem.

Linda Jacobs said...

An intriguing poem! I've read it several times, now, and am still not sure I understand all of it. But I do love the words you used and the images created in my mind.

SweetTalking Guy.. said...

This says a lot in a few words and the picture enhances the whole.