With this poem your thoughts are very unique. I especially love the last two lines. And, your photo is beautiful. You gotta love nature when it looks like that. Well done. Have a nice night.
I like the photo, but I'm fairly sure the third line would make more sense with a tiny alteration. 'attempting' perhaps, just so that it doesn't sound like you're using requites as a noun instead of a verb.
An intriguing poem! I've read it several times, now, and am still not sure I understand all of it. But I do love the words you used and the images created in my mind.
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Very interesting poem, nice shot. Are you a new blogger? Thank you your kind words;)
I liked the imagery in this poem. In particular:
embroidery gathering dust
from fatigue
Very nice. Thanks for sharing! :-)
With this poem your thoughts are very unique. I especially love the last two lines. And, your photo is beautiful. You gotta love nature when it looks like that. Well done. Have a nice night.
Beautiful photo, and interesting poem, i like the image of the embroidery gathering dust
I like the photo, but I'm fairly sure the third line would make more sense with a tiny alteration. 'attempting' perhaps, just so that it doesn't sound like you're using requites as a noun instead of a verb.
Lovely photo and words that ring.
Thank You Stu that does read much better. I hope you enjoyed the view. Still
Attempting ot thaw requites. A very good and timely poem.
An intriguing poem! I've read it several times, now, and am still not sure I understand all of it. But I do love the words you used and the images created in my mind.
This says a lot in a few words and the picture enhances the whole.
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